Description: In writing we wrote about a camp themed story. My goal for this piece of writing is to entertain. There were many ways of writing we could do to entertain I chose to do a day in a life. since the cabin group I was in, stayed in the Willow lodge it was an ensuite I don't know what the Popla lodge was like where most of the girls were but I decided to do a day in a life of our cabins toilet.
this is my draft:
this is my draft:
This is my story:
Feedback: I like that it is a nice long story
Feedforward: I think it could have had more detail
Evaluation: I think that when I have in my story in different fonts for different things It added that detail but I think that next time I should use less and longer paragraphs.
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